One day I was gonna watch my brother play he let me sit in the front my brother was playing
ice hockey that was hes favorite game a man tose him the hockey thingy but my brother got
hurt so i just hurried at the icy and tried to heal my brother but i could not so i prefer that i we
take his place and i made him sit in the fronti went passing the ice thing and i gave to a boy
then it was the fanills could i make it yes or no lets see i went passing the thing and i goal and
we won i said see brother you can win next time everyone said that i was the braves girl i said
thank you.
ice hockey that was hes favorite game a man tose him the hockey thingy but my brother got
hurt so i just hurried at the icy and tried to heal my brother but i could not so i prefer that i we
take his place and i made him sit in the fronti went passing the ice thing and i gave to a boy
then it was the fanills could i make it yes or no lets see i went passing the thing and i goal and
we won i said see brother you can win next time everyone said that i was the braves girl i said
thank you.
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